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Tuesday 7 June 2016

Haunted house

Planning


Characters: Francesca and Ronald
Setting: Haunted house
Problem: Ronald and Francesca Get lost into a creepy house.
Solution: They find their way out of the house from the beginning.
Conclusion/Ending: Francesca learns not to go near that house.
Moral: Never go to a haunted house ever.


The wicked haunted house in the neighbourhood.


It was  one sunny day in 1975 where a lady named Francesca lived in the beautiful state of Washington D.C. People were kind,loving and respectful,
except for one family living in one house. People would warn each other not
to go near or in their house because apparently the residents of the neighbourhood  would hear screams from the house.


A few days later Francesca held a birthday party for her daughter Anna.
“Thank you for coming to my birthday party” Anna said. Throughout the night people left and the music increased  up to the highest level  and people started to have a little bit more of the drinks they shouldn’t have. Francesca was so over the edge that she took a little stroll to the destination she shouldn’t have been at.


Meanwhile Francesca did not seem to care because there was a sign saying “Enter at your own risk”.


“What's that gonna do kill me?” Francesca said out loud. She climbed up the stairs and stood there.


As she stood there she looked back and when she looked front the door was open! Francesca snapped out of it but it was to late because she was already inside! Someone else came in which happened to be her dear friend, Ronald.
He snapped out of it too and they both took a brief moment and gulped.
“This is their house!” said Francesca.
“Who’s house?” said Ronald terrified.
“The haunted families house.” said Francesca , but at that moment they heard a screech.  Francesca was in the need of fainting and fainted into Ronald's arms.
Unfortunately at that moment the lights cut out and Francesca was still unresponsive.
“Francesca! Francesca! wake up!” said Ronald. Francesca woke up and said “Are we still here!”
“Yes!” now we need to find a way to get out of here!” they walked softly to what they thought was a exit but actually it was a creepy mirror!


They walked inside the mirror and to their surprise they saw something that was so horrifying that they both felt like fainting! There were over a thousand
skeleton bones just lying in a dusty pit! They both walked upon the nasty bones
And found a small hole leading to another place in the house when they climbed through the hole they thought that they were in the bedroom but they were actually in the kitchen! There was blood in the sink, stored eyeballs in the cupboard and human parts in the freezer and fridge! They opened one cupboard
that was completely empty with a big hole in it!  Again , they had to climb through it which was actually tiring than it sounds. As they climbed through the
Hole it appeared to be the longest tunnel you could ever imagine. It was probably as long as a whole corridor length! Anyways they finally reached the
end of the tunnel and saw the creepiest room of all! The parents bedroom!
They walked around the room when suddenly Ronald screamed,
“Ahhhhhhh the ghost has got me!!!!!!”, and dropped his bag on the floor.
“No this can’t be happening!” said Francesca terrified. She gulped about fifty times until she calmed down.
“Okay all I need to do is find Ronald and get out of here!” said Francesca feeling fearless. She grabbed Ronald’s bag and lit up the spare pack of matches and went through a portal which leaded to a few rooms until she saw Ronald.


Ronald was so scared that he literally froze. Francesca grabbed Ronald and
Ran to the exit because in that room she then realised that they were in the room that they were in at the beginning. She knocked the door down and they both ran back to her house. She opened the door and found that her daughter had already  cleaned up and feel asleep on the couch. Ronald then went home in a taxi and told her that it will be okay. When he left, Francesca now knows not to go near the places she shouldn’t be and from that night on Francesca knows not to wander off to places she shouldn’t be.


Haunted House, Old House,

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Alicia
Good work. I like your picture. It is so spooky. Good work keep it up.

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