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Thursday 27 October 2016

Writing assessment: I heard a whisper but no one was there

I was walking in a cold cold alley. My fingers were suddenly turning blue and purple.My face felt like it was in a ice cube and my feet felt the pain of pins and needles but I knew that I would be back home in no time. I reached half way out of the alley when I suddenly heard a whisper. It was so quiet that I couldn’t hear what it said. I decided to ignore it and continued walking. I then heard it again and felt shivers go down my neck.That’s when I knew I wasn’t alone.


I started to walk a lot faster until I heard the whisper again.My guts told me that I couldn’t take it no
more and to just look back but my brain told me to not look back. I didn’t know what to do so I looked back but no one was there.It felt frightening because I knew that the whisper wasn’t my imagination it was something or someone.I started looking in the bushes to see if I found any luck.I only ended up finding a few two dollar coins and a small rock but I was determined to find out what that noise was. The temperature started dropping so I started to look faster.


As I was looking, for the fourth time I heard the whisper. I was getting sick of it so I looked back but there was still no one behind me! My heart was beating a lot faster than usual! I knew that my legs were not very determined but my mind was still telling me to go. I started to look in the trees and by the logs but there was still no sign of anything. My eyes suddenly started to see blurry and things were coming out of my mind. I shaked my head a lot and things became more clearer. Then I decided to give up.


When I gave up I was nearly there when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I screamed and ran into the bushes until the person walked past. It had been about twenty minutes since I saw no one walk past. I walked carefully out of the bush and checked both ways.There was no sign of anyone.My spine felt as if it was frozen. I saw a dim light coming from the hills so I started to go down  to see if anyone was there and surprisingly I saw a small house. I quietly invited myself in and for  once it felt nice and warm and I smelt a delicious supper. I had to find who lives here. I checked all the rooms but they were all empty. The last three rooms left were the living room, the dining room and the kitchen.My stomach felt tight and my brain felt scared. I opened the door and found a surprise.



There were four fairies sitting on the table eating some yummy chicken soup! I then asked them,
“Was it one of you guys that whispered to me while I was walking?”
“Yes it was me I’m sorry if I scared you!” said the blue fairy.
“I was flying in the reserve to get some wood for the fireplace when I saw you. I whispered hello
then tapped your shoulder for attention! I’m sorry”
“It’s ok” I said and then they offered me some soup. I was thankful but I knew that my parents
were expecting me to be home any minute so I passed. I thanked the fairies then continued my journey back home.